So to begin the session we were asked beforehand to bring a piece of research, sampling and a final piece. Now obviously, at this stage in the project no-one had a final piece and this rattled me a little bit. After giving it some thought however, I put together these presentation boards to group together what I have been doing so far into the appropriate categories. And so, although I knew that I did not have a final piece yet, my work was very much still developing, I had a final piece from the last few weeks that has progressed from my original starting point. From putting together the Pinterest brooches, to beginning my own technical drawing, completing these using digital processes and then, as I did with the jewellery found online, putting them together to create a hybrid.
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We first had to take our work to one side, and on our own come up with a story that explains our work well. Trying to make sure that this "story" if you will, focus' on all the most important parts of our work. Then we presented in pairs and gave feedback: What you said VS what they heard/remembered Were they the points you wanted to get across? I think I had all the ingredients for a really good story to go behind my work, I just need to figure out how to word it - I don't want it to sound like a sob story 'my Granddad passed away last term, and my Gran passed away at the beginning of this term, so I'd like do dedicate my collection to them' No. Although I do want people to know the reasoning behind my work, I feel like it needs to be much more than that, this isn't the X-Factor, I don't need a sad story to make it through the the next round. If anything, I need an inspiring story, that tells the tale of a young woman that is enthusiastic, hard working and well-mannered in order to make it to the next round: Postgraduate Life. Even though I chose to pursue more creative subjects after high school, Mathematics and English Literature are still very close to my heart, one of the reasons I think I decided to keep going with the technical drawings is because of my love for numbers and geometry; in fact, I can't believe I've never dabbled in it before!
Some of my notes towards my story:
After the pairing exercise we then moved up to presenting in groups of 4, where we had 10 minutes to present out work, then 5 and then 1, with feedback and questions in-between. This was ridiculously helpful when we're trying to refine our speech - only say what is really necessary, because in some circumstances you might only have a minute of someones time to explain to them why they should be involved in your work or ideas! It was a rush, but we made it in the end, focussing on only the essential parts of my work:
< Grandma's Jewellery >
< Creating something beautiful from old, tarnished objects >
< Taking something feminine and adding a more masculine touch with the technical drawings >
< Luxurious, stunning designs >
< Playing with layers, textures, secrets >
< Like a labyrinth, complex patterns >
Focussing then on these 6 most important points, we were asked to come up with just 6 words to define or title our work. Six individual words or three two-word phrases, or as I did just one 6 word phrase:
A LABYRINTH OF LIFE TIME & LUXURY
Oh I just love a bit of good ol' alliteration! Also please ignore the fact I misspelt 'labyrinth' more than once in my notebook... But all in all, I think a pretty successful session! A lot was covered and I even presented my one minute story to the whole group, not out of choice, but I am so glad Les got me to do it... I just need to calm the shakes down and control my voice a little. Maybe try recording myself presenting so that I can figure out myself where I'm going wrong, work on my confidence a little.